Group Task : Unit 3, Task 2

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Letter of Application:

 Content: 8/10
 - Statements backed with evidence
 - Elaborate on strength and area of specialty
 - Explaining why he is qualified for the job

Language: 6/10
 - Grammar errors

Organization: 8/10
 - Paragraphs of 4 to 5 lines


Letter of Transmittal:

Content: 7/10
 - Straightforward
 - No unnecessary details included
 - No contact details for recipient to follow up

Language: 8/10

Organization: 8/10

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